Hey can you please critique my new website?
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A few random comments and impressions:
The font for the text at the top (Here is the church...) is not as easy to read as it could be. Top right: the globe in the hands looks like a watermelon as much as planet earth. (Oceans would look good in *blue*.)
Blue face image with continents superimposed is a striking image - very good for attracting attention. But the message gets lost because the text below is too long, not large enough, doesn't grab attention like the graphic. Put shorter, more direct message here, larger text.
Overall, the message for this home page is indistinct. What is Franciscan Vocation? Is this the website for the entire Franciscan Order? What is the point of this website? Perhaps you could include a Statement of Purpose (for the website) near the top of the web page.
I don't mean to be all negative. I like the graphics. I would like to see the graphics better support the overall purpose and message.
Under the peace symbol and "Imagine", perhaps the text should say "Fight affluenza!" instead of "Imagine a world without..." It's shorter, gets more to the point.
Looks pretty cool! Good material, passionate topics...keep up the good job!
A few random comments and impressions:
The font for the text at the top (Here is the church...) is not as easy to read as it could be. Top right: the globe in the hands looks like a watermelon as much as planet earth. (Oceans would look good in *blue*.)
Blue face image with continents superimposed is a striking image - very good for attracting attention. But the message gets lost because the text below is too long, not large enough, doesn't grab attention like the graphic. Put shorter, more direct message here, larger text.
Overall, the message for this home page is indistinct. What is Franciscan Vocation? Is this the website for the entire Franciscan Order? What is the point of this website? Perhaps you could include a Statement of Purpose (for the website) near the top of the web page.
I don't mean to be all negative. I like the graphics. I would like to see the graphics better support the overall purpose and message.
Under the peace symbol and "Imagine", perhaps the text should say "Fight affluenza!" instead of "Imagine a world without..." It's shorter, gets more to the point.
Keep at it, this a very good start. Blessings be.
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