Through the hurt. Through the pain. Through the stop signs, lef and right turns. Through the sorrow and heatbreak, the answers we refuse to take. Through the cold. Through the numbness, so numb I could'nt fell you calling me. Through the darkness, to whom blocks the light. I am lonley.
Answer:
It needs a much better ending.
That's actually v. good!
The ending is the point, I get it.
Thats really good. I like it.
it is alright.
It's nice, kind of depressing but nice. I get what your trying to say. But a rhyme scheme would make it catchier. You can use a thesauris for that. But I still like it, in fact, I have a lot to relate to that right now.
very endearing, i love poetry that is honest
I think it is very deep.
it is a creation, an expression of yourself. it is good that you are not afraid to share and it doesn't matter if I say why I think it's good. It's good just because you did it.
I like it :)
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