Can some one help me write this in one sentence?
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Children have different behavior when thy face grief and death, a child’s age affects the way they deal with death and grief, and that are ready to talk about death and grief should de helped.
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Depending on age and maturity level,a child will experience various stages of grief after the death of a loved one and should be helped when he or she is ready.
Since the maturity level of a child affects their diffrent stages of grief after a death of an loved one, one must wait to help the child grieve when he/she is ready.
Definitely number 1. It seems more polished and it flows right. Sentence 2 doesn't seem as polished. It comes out sort of choppy, like you just threw it together.
Children of different ages and maturity deal with grief at various stages and have differing behavioral reactions, therefore, it's best to wait until the child is ready to help him or her deal with the loss of a loved one.
CHILDREN DEALING WITH DIFFERENT TYPES OF GRIEF USUALLY HAVE SEVERAL BEHAVIORAL REACTIONS, WHICH NEEDS TO BE HANDLE ON THE KIDS TIME NOT ANYBODY ELSE.
When a child suffers a loss such as death, he goes through several stages of grief, but you must wait for each presenting stage to help him deal with it .
Because children age and mature differently they will have varying reactions to death and grief, and considering this may help the child deal with his/her grief in a healthful and efficacious manner.
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Children's grieving process on death of a love one is directly proportional to their age/maturity therefore one should wait til the child is more mature to assist them in their grieving.
too much info for one sentence to be grammatically correct. how 'bout 2 ?
A child's reaction of grief due to the death of a loved one can many times reflect the child's maturity. It may be necessary to wait until the child is emotionally ready in order to allow them to verbalize their feelings.
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I like the first one!!
Grief affects us all in different ways and we all adopt varying coping strategies; children appear to present as being nonchalant when in this emotional state. They have not been tarnished by the expectations of man as to the appropriateness of grief, and often present as being unaffected.
Hope this helps best way I could intellectually restate your sentence.
Children go through the same levels of grief as adults. They feel the denial, sadness, anger.I think how long it takes to get through the stages depends on the age or developmental level of the child. Young children do not understand death as well as older children. It it's often confusing for a young child to be told that the deceased is in heaven or with the angels. It is also sometimes frightening for the child to be told that the deceased is sleeping. It needs to be explained functionally to a young child, for example.."grandpa is in heaven now or what ever you decide should be said. If the child questions or suggests to you that grandpa will be back explain to them that he can't come back and explain what happens to the body(grandpa was sick and his heart quit working...) this leaves little room for the child to think that grandpa will be back or be afraid because grandpa is sleeping and maybe this will happen to me if I go to sleep. As a child gets older they tend to put a face to death so to speak. They may imagine death as a monster that came and took grandpa away and now grandpa is dead and he is an angel. Older children cope better this way or understand better this way than younger.
Depending on the age and level of maturity,this being one of the major factors influencing a child's behavioral reactions, children should be helped to deal with the loss and grief of a loved one only when ready, as they have different reactions concerning death and grief.
This is a real long sentence but not recommended in modern writing as it takes too much time to compose, and also places a heavy burden on the reader who has to figure out the logic, contents and structure of the sentence.
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When a loved one die, children will go through the grief of knowing her and have a nervous breakdown then going through the 5 stages of grief.
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P.S. I am no child care helper but my great grandma died when i was much younger and I was deeply saddened by it I even had what I advised up there as well.
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A child's reaction to the death of a loved one depends on his maturity and a willingness to mentor him through his grief.
The stage of development will affect a child capacity to experience the typical stages of grief, therefore any assisitance should be carefully sequenced to the childs needs.
the first sentence sounds the best. When I have to decide how to writs something down I usually try saying it out loud and the best sounding one is usually the best sentence
Why do I get the feeling that you want us to paraphrase this so you can use it in your homework?
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